What I don't like about your photos is that they're too forced. You're too caught up in 'being a photographer, capturing whatever you see'. There's no heart behind your pictures, and I doubt very few memories - essentially, there is no life in them. Instead, it's rigid 'oh this will look on my Tumblr' stuff. Live more of a life than you are already, and capture the memories as you go along. You'll find the result a lot more pleasing and satisfying. (Also, do you know what focusing is?)
Thanks, this has been the best advice I’ve gotten in a long time. I’ll try and find more natural shots that don’t look so rigid. Some of my shots are out of focus I realize that, but not all of them I don’t think.